ext_120165 ([identity profile] byakkodan-slash.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] gnine 2007-08-09 10:44 am (UTC)

Wow. It's lovely to see your art evolve.

First off, the Alec/Seregil pic just makes me squee. Big time. When's that fourth book due out?! *ahem* Anyway, I love the sketchiness in this. Love the drape and the play of the bedsheets. You really got the feel of the fabric there. I'm not crazy about Seregil's left arm. I feel the bicep muscles are not anatomically correct. But outside of that their bodies are niiiice. Once again, you do necks oh-so lovely. But the hair makes the picture. The way the wisps of hair fall carelessly over Seregil's forhead, and the way it is draped over the pillow gives Seregil an air of inattention or tiredness.

As for the second one, I love the pinched face you gave Draco, it really fits with what I see him as. He looks older, but Harry doesn't look like a 30 year-old war vet, he looks like he's 17. It's probably the hair. That being said, he does look older than the boys on the floor. They're really the best depicted in this picture. The languid tilt of Albus's head, how he leans back on his hands, and how Scorpi-what's-his-name gives an obviously fake yawn to demonstrate his non-caring. Their pose is natural, and they interact and touch one another well in the picture.

*pretty!*

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