I think the perspective may be slightly too sharp and angular - I think in real life the angle you used wouldn't be so acute.
And don't worry, I've been taking art classes for ages, I've never been able to get perspective. What I learned that was even more valuable than perspective was how to diguise when you can't draw it.
But honestly, if you hadn't drawn attention to it, I wouldn't have notice. The picture is just gorgeous and sweet and you've managed to conquer my two greatest foes - color and detail/scenery, so I'm pretty in awe of you right there.
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Date: 2008-06-11 05:55 pm (UTC)And don't worry, I've been taking art classes for ages, I've never been able to get perspective. What I learned that was even more valuable than perspective was how to diguise when you can't draw it.
But honestly, if you hadn't drawn attention to it, I wouldn't have notice. The picture is just gorgeous and sweet and you've managed to conquer my two greatest foes - color and detail/scenery, so I'm pretty in awe of you right there.